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©2008-2009 ~shisleya
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I've done it!!! >_________<
Yeah, this is my first serious-almost-professional attempt to do a manga page....yatta!!! Well, it is the "first" as realization, but obviously it's not the first page of a story... I just choose a random moment of my original story to represent.
Anyway, the grey shades are given by photoshop, but I have to learn how to do them by hand. This is a "temporary" solution, I think... but I'm quite satisfied the same.

The reading is from left to right.
I hope there are no grammar mistakes in the dialogues and it's a bit understandable...
...comments are very appreciated... If you are curious to know the rest of the story by reading this page, well... I can't ask more!!!! XDD

You can see other characters sketches here-->[link]
(but they're old and my style changed a bit)
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For italians:
Non metto la traduzione, ma se qualcuno non capisce chieda pure XD

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:iconeldora1200:
That is so cool! I wishI could draw manga like that! Keep writing I want to hear more. :phae:

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:iconshisleya:
Thank you very much! :D I'll keep more in future ^___^

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Every man has a task in his life, and it never is the one he would like to choose. (Hermann Hesse)
:icondemongeneralxellos:
Very nice work on the manga, I can follow your dialog fairly well in the fact that goes from somewhat serious to a sarcastic person. Nice sentence structure but some words feel misplaced like "but I cant thank adequately a person whose name..." personally think it runs better like "but I cant adequately thank a person whose name..." again personal opinion. Maybe a few other things with the sentence structure but the artwork is pretty solid and overall I can follow your dialog very well so I give you a 7/10

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Life is only the beginning of solitude. So when we die what does this say. What will happen that opening day. Will my life be at an end or will it begin all over again.
:iconshisleya:
Oh....wow!! Thank you very much for your kind and useful comments! :D Well, english is not my language, so I tried to translate the dialog from mine (italian) closely as possible to the original sense... so I imagined that I could have mistaken something... but if you can follow the dialog very well and understand the characters' personalities, it's already a great thing!!! So, thank you! Your comments really made me happy :aww:

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Every man has a task in his life, and it never is the one he would like to choose. (Hermann Hesse)
:icondemongeneralxellos:
hey its np guess ill be checking in more often or not on your works then. tata for now

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Life is only the beginning of solitude. So when we die what does this say. What will happen that opening day. Will my life be at an end or will it begin all over again.
:iconshisleya:
Thank you, it's very appreciated!:) I return the add with pleausure :)

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Every man has a task in his life, and it never is the one he would like to choose. (Hermann Hesse)
:iconsaberm:
Mio Dio Rosy ma è fantastico! Sembra vero! Grandissima, mi piace davvero tanto bravissima!

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:icondillian:
more! :D

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:iconshisleya:
Uh ma davvero sembra "vero"?!? *____* Davvero davvero davvero?!!? OHOHOH ora mi hai montato!! :XD: Grazie mille Mari, sono contentissima ^___^ Ora mancano le altre innumerevoli tavole, ma va beh, dettagli :XD:

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Every man has a task in his life, and it never is the one he would like to choose. (Hermann Hesse)

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